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Fiction

Immortals


The last human sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door. Chaz came in with a bouquet.


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Immortals

Credit: Lucy Glover/COSMOS

A loud knock startled Randall awake, and the book he had been dozing over slipped from his lap. Odd. This wasn't the usual time for Chaz to stop by.

"Come on in, Chaz," he called out. He stretched to retrieve the paperback, but it had tumbled just out of reach.

He looked up to see Chaz's familiar synthetic visage peering at him over an enormous arrangement of spring flowers.

"Don't trouble yourself, Mr Randall. Please allow me to help." Chaz deposited the vase on the nearby kitchen table and placed the book on the sidetable beside Randall's comfortable recliner. "I'm afraid we've lost your place. Perhaps if you can tell me the last thing you remember reading…"

Randall laughed. "I do appreciate your company, Chaz. I'm a lonely, bitter old man." He saw puzzlement cross Chaz's face as he processed the contradiction between the words and the laughter.

"I hope you are jesting, Mr Randall. But if, in fact, you are lonely, we could easily arrange for more frequent company." He paused for what seemed to Randall like dramatic emphasis. "At this time, you are now our sole responsibility."

Ah. So that was it. Halfway across the world the last real woman on Earth had gone to her rest. Or maybe not. Randall had to ask. "Did Fai Li upload, or did she pass naturally?"

Chaz's words were, in a way, reassuring. "She remained faithful to her decision to die naturally."

"Thank you, Chaz, for that news." Randall pushed himself slowly to his feet. "I need to get up and move about a bit anyway. I'm creakier every day. Let's see what you brought me."

The robot stood patiently as Randall examined the bouquet. "Lovely. Is this pink and orange a new hybrid?"

"Yes, sir. It's one I designed myself. Does it please you?"

Randall noted the expectant look on Chaz's face. He pulled a stem sporting a narcissus with an orange double cone and pink ruffle. The fragrance of orange and grapefruit wafted to him. A joke? Certainly a surprise. "It's charming," he replied. "Your ingenuity shines brilliantly once again."

"Thank you, sir." Chaz smiled and dropped his eyes, a gesture that revealed self-satisfaction softened by modesty. Randall remained amazed at the range of subtle expression his companion could convey. He often forgot, in fact, that Chaz was an artificial being, very complex and skilled, but artificial nonetheless.

Randall began to poke the stem back into the arrangement randomly. With only a slight widening of his eyes conveying distress, Chaz took it from him. "Allow me." He raised it to his humaniform nose for a moment before returning it to the exact original spot. "Very satisfying," he said.

Randall blinked hard. "Did you just sniff that daff?"

"Yes, sir."

"But why? You don't have a sense of smell."

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Readers' comments

Knock

The author doesn't credit Fredric Brown, whose 1948 story "Knock" ends with the words "The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door..." I assume she intended the beginning of the story as an allusion, but it seems like crediting Mr. Brown in a note would be the classy thing to do.

Credit where credit is due

In fact, that wasn't my tag line, but the magazine's contribution. In any case, I am happy to acknowledge Mr. Brown's story. The "knock" notion has become such a meme, I feel it's the equivalent of saying "it was a dark and stormy night" or quoting Shakespeare without using his name. Those in the know immediately get the allusion, as you did. So, no disrespect to Mr. Brown intended!

Marvelous

Well written story. Congragulations. I hope we see more of your writing in the future.